MARCO DALMATION JASPER

This is very good, quite original. It was a bit confusing to have some of his freckles glow, and not others. His coloring is a bit weird to, it seems to get duller the lower you go, that may be because of him glowing or tha background glowing, whichever it is (which is cool), but it still would better if you had made it look less like a bruise and more like a shadow. The right side of his neck is slightly weird too. It is hard to tell what is what on his neck. The nose is slightly off also but overall pretty good. Most of the lines are done very well, not confusing at all. Other than his nose, all his facial features are done just right. Just like Marco. The jewel on his forehead is a great idea, and the shine on it is great, drawing your eyes to it but not taking the whole focus of the picture. The shadow around it is good too. I like the sparkles you put in Marco's hair (everyone loves sparkles XD) it really adds to the glowing thing he has going on, and the jewel on his forehead. His shape of his hair is good, if not a little like Oluo's. It may look like Olou's because you have this floaty thing going on, which does add to the otherworldly part of the picture, and probably explains his hair. I like how you had him winking. It helps to show Marco's more playful side, which is very prominent in this picture. I have to say this is very good. Awesome job <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/>